Thursday, September 9, 2010

A Home

Green.


I wish to live

Deep

In a mossy wood

Where

The silence is only

Disturbed

By the buzzing of

Bees.

Where the rain

Falls,

Like the sky's own

Tears,

To wash off

Mine.

Where the cumbersome

People

Will cease to find

Me.
 
 
 
Huh. I wrote this a couple years ago, but now reading it, it seems a little dark and reclusive. It's nice though, and this is the first poem that I ever attempted to apply a rhythm to. The prompt was "Where in the world would you most like to live and why? Write your response in the form of a poem." Give it a shot!
 
 

1 comment:

  1. On the clifftops beside the sea
    That is where I want to be
    Under the mountains beneath the sky
    Watching the wild geese as they fly by
    But there's something odd, you see
    Because where I want is where I be.

    Don't revoke my poetic license!

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